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Post by thegreatdave on Mar 18, 2007 10:32:22 GMT -5
Well I haven't done well in the playing part of music but i have written a couple of songs. If all of you are on myspace I could put the link up so you can see it.
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Post by Krystle on Mar 18, 2007 14:09:23 GMT -5
Sure go ahead and post the link. We'd love to see them. I've written a few songs too, but they're not on my myspace.
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Post by thegreatdave on Mar 18, 2007 14:59:35 GMT -5
Well i have lots of songs too that aren't on myspace but i'll but the one I have on myspace up.
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Post by thegreatdave on Mar 18, 2007 15:10:19 GMT -5
ok instead of posting the URL i decided to paste it here
ok i'm going to write a song tell me if you like it!
tell me why i could not be with you and tell me why i can never stop looking at you i don't have a clue why i'm stairing strait at your face but it's not easy to miss and know i have found the one can you help me see the one standing right infront of me it's not to hard to find her it's just when i talk to here i find it hard and start to choke,
chourus: i am running around not knowing what to do i can see that she knows me and i don't know why she touches me that way can you tell me why i have know clue
i know see the light that guides me to you can you also see the same light i hope you can so you can find your way to me and i need you by my side to carry on the day and find my way back to you.
oh and if you could give it a title that would be great
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Post by Klark on Mar 18, 2007 17:44:08 GMT -5
Can You Tell Me...struck me as a really good title for it.
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Post by Krystle on Mar 19, 2007 20:47:49 GMT -5
Yeah I like that title too! It was beautiful!
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Post by thegreatdave on Mar 20, 2007 16:22:03 GMT -5
Thanks I think I sometimes criticize my work too much.
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Post by Klark on Mar 20, 2007 16:26:59 GMT -5
Everyone does. I think it's a sign that you care about it.
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Post by thegreatdave on Mar 20, 2007 16:39:02 GMT -5
True but just let me know if you want me to post more.
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Post by Klark on Mar 20, 2007 16:40:56 GMT -5
Go for it, dude! We'll tell ya what we think and so far, we like what we see!
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Post by Krystle on Mar 20, 2007 20:56:35 GMT -5
Thanks I think I sometimes criticize my work too much. Yeah, we all do that. I'm my own worst critic most of the time. It kind of keeps me from getting a big head I guess and keeps me grounded. I really do care about my work as well!
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Post by thegreatdave on Mar 22, 2007 13:48:06 GMT -5
ok this next one i'm going to post is kinda a dark one
don't know i haven't posted one of these in awhile and the rest of them are songs I thought i should post another one. I still wonder why i've been put on this earth. I can't really see a porpuse for me, and i don't know what i want to do with my life. I kinda know but i'm not totally sure. I'm starting to think that maybe I shouldn't be so enclosed from my friends and family. I'm not to sure if i'm ready to do that by talking I might have to do it by song and still i don't know if i will be able to do it.
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Post by thegreatdave on Jul 1, 2007 23:54:39 GMT -5
so did anyone like this one?
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Post by Krystle on Jul 26, 2007 18:45:18 GMT -5
I really liked it!
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